The haikus we looked at were celebrating nature, so I really like how your poem shows the vindictiveness of the winter months--especially on us Michigan drivers! Good use of the multi-syllable word "undetectable" in the second line also.
This is really visual. We've all seen cars slid on hidden patches of ice. And how you hope they don't crash or "smack" into anything but sometimes they do. Very nice.
The haikus we looked at were celebrating nature, so I really like how your poem shows the vindictiveness of the winter months--especially on us Michigan drivers! Good use of the multi-syllable word "undetectable" in the second line also.
ReplyDeleteNice visual - drive safely!
ReplyDeleteThis haiku serves as a caution for people to drive safely especially today with the weather being so lousy.....
ReplyDeleteThis is really visual. We've all seen cars slid on hidden patches of ice. And how you hope they don't crash or "smack" into anything but sometimes they do. Very nice.
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